Two Words: Plot Development. Great story; and I hate to be the critic of this smexy series: but you need some series plot development. Gut twisters, drama bombs, random explosions, ambushes, Britney Spears, the Afleck duck, all the plot twists. ALL DA PLOT TWISTS
Also: when the rebels get home, their better some badass reunion party. For example; you could make it a “War Christmas” at the rebel outpost; that always gets every teary in WWII movies.. Examples: Capt Tim goes home to his loving family, Adm. Athen hits the local bar and parties with the crew: Idk anything – just as long as it gives the audience a glimpse into the characters “normal” lives. Also: give the characters at least 1-2 traits that are obvious, for example, Babyhoof could be quite but intelligent, Captain Tim could be a serious badass, Adm. Athen could be that clever guy that does his job well but doesnt take much seriously, and eventually gets blown up while laughing. Idk – anything, doesnt have to be what I said.
97% of all great entertainment vids are driven by plot and characters. Hell, look at the Walking Dead…
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Retired Pirate 6/25/14 -- 6/15/15
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